Saturday snippet

I axed the snippet. Here’s a great flickr series instead. (Dean, you gotta check these out.)

I was stuck today, and I wasn’t sure why, so I posted the last few hundred words here. Sometimes it helps, seeing my writing in a different format. I see things I’ve missed when I looked at the original manuscript.

Can’t really put a finger on it, but this bit was all wrong.

D.

2 Comments

  1. Dean says:

    No shit. Wow.

    I’d love to be able to take photos like that.

  2. microsoar says:

    Me, I’d just be happy to sit in at the shoot.